Love your vocal on this song - it's a special song - albeit probably not a dead ringer for a pitch - but I don't care - wanna write great songs... :)
• v2 - the performance I comped in was the one without the internal rhyme - and I think it works best there:
We know history repeats itself
And here we go again creating our own hell
The only way to save ourselves is to begin...
I know I had asked for you to try internal rhymes to match the other verses - but this just works for me and I really am not missing it matching or not. Mentioning our own hell etc. is fringe but so's the music so I think we should let this song be what it is - more arty but awesome.
So no revisions from my end. After listening to my comp choices, what say you?