I like this one melodically but needs a complete overhaul from the ground up lyrically. It's another MC Escher-ish song in that the verses and choruses land in different keys but work with each other seamlessly because of voice leading... :)
I like the fun-ness of this song - I'm including the original song so you can hear the phrasing and rhyme scheme I had going - I'd like to have that be our template in one version - and as always am open to a complete topline rewrite over the track as well.
I like the fun-ness of this song - I'm including the original song so you can hear the phrasing and rhyme scheme I had going - I'd like to have that be our template in one version - and as always am open to a complete topline rewrite over the track as well.