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  • 23.01.12 writing seeds

I like this one melodically but needs a complete overhaul from the ground up lyrically. It's another MC Escher-ish song in that the verses and choruses land in different keys but work with each other seamlessly because of voice leading... :) 

I like the fun-ness of this song - I'm including the original song so you can hear the phrasing and rhyme scheme I had going - I'd like to have that be our template in one version - and as always am open to a complete topline rewrite over the track as well. 

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